Audio’s poor and action is quite slow. Soldier on, mate.
Need to pay a bit more attention to the ‘3 act story structure' - beginning, middle and end. Keep up the good work chaps.
This is just a sample from a lets play, I never wrote this.
Lots of NRG. Time and editing was spot on. Well done chaps.
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