Audio’s poor and action is quite slow. Soldier on, mate.
Need to pay a bit more attention to the ‘3 act story structure' - beginning, middle and end. Keep up the good work chaps.
This is just a sample from a lets play, I never wrote this.
Lots of NRG. Time and editing was spot on. Well done chaps.
WOW!!! So well writen. So well directed. One of the rare gems that you come across and wish you'd thought of it first.
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